Friday, February 11, 2011

Bowling

In the essay Slide, Roll, Slam the author does an amazing job of describing the ally. The paper starts off with a strong tittle. It does not tell you exactly what the paper is about, but it is interesting enough so it will draw in people who come across it.  The paper starts of strong with the sentence "The sounds of shoes sliding against smooth wood lanes and bowling balls rolling like thunder then slamming against multiple pins rings in my ears." The write did a great job of describing the bowling ally. The reader call really picture what is going on. You can tell the author spent a lot of time at her site.  This allowed her to be certain about her conclusion. It was helpful to understand what she was describing because she wrote about everything at the ally. 

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